It was a rainy night. And there they sat together; the two people in the world who knew each other the best. But tonight, they never felt more apart. They were alone in the house. Valeries parents had gone in town, but trusted them to be together by themselves.
To this day, no one is sure how that night began the way it did, but they both knew how it had ended up. Valerie was in tears, and she couldnt stop, not even long enough to talk or to catch her breath.
Alex held her. It was all he was able to do. He began to think in his head Why am I doing this to her? Shes been so good to me. and she had. She was there through thick and thin for him; when they fought, when he was depressed, which was quite often. And she was even there when he thought of suicide. That was probably the most painful of all to Valerie. All he knew, was that this was how he felt. He couldnt bear to see her like this, but he also couldnt bear to stay with her when he didnt feel it anymore; when he didnt love her like he used to. They hadnt felt right for months, and there was someone else on Alexs mind. All he could do was try to comfort her, with what little credibility as a boyfriend he had left.
Dont cry Val, he whispered as she buried her face in his arms, Its okay. Everythings alright.
No, its not, she replied, looking him in the face and choking through her tears. Im losing you!
Alex didnt know what to say. He just stared back at her, feeling helpless, and she continued to cry. She cried until there were no tears left. Both of them knew, that if this wasnt the end tonight, then it would come soon. It was only a matter of time.














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this is a very good start though. i'd say try to finish it!!
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the voice of the artist is the unconscious voice of the masses.
~brandon boyd
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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
haha I agree with Jake by saying Alex is an asshole. But then I would be hypocritical if I didn't say I am too.
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thanks for the input!
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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
Sure thing.
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but nah, breaking up with someone doesn't make you an asshole.
It's good though, a brief glimpse into a sad moment, a hint at all the story behind it that isn't written.
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Hey you- don't help them to bury the light.
does it help that its still a great beginning to a story?
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the voice of the artist is the unconscious voice of the masses.
~brandon boyd
p.p.s. how is the picture related?
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the voice of the artist is the unconscious voice of the masses.
~brandon boyd
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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
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